After our meeting, we decided that both Amy and I were going to work on developing the poster ideas and combining mine, Joe's and Amy's ideas into a working set of posters.
Amy produced a few ideas and then sent them over to me to work on. These were Amy's ideas:
We all decided that the shapes used need to stick within the isometric grid and were going to be cubes or cuboids. We also felt as though images weren't really going to work in 3D shapes, and should be placed in more simple isometric shapes. The blocks also didn't look right when they were filled in with a colour, so I started to make some changes to the poster.
This is what I came up with:
As everyone quite liked the 3D illustrations that I had previously created, we tried to incorporate these into a simpler layout with larger images.
Feedback given was that there was too much white. We all also felt as though the illustrations were distracting and didn't really compliment the rest of the poster.
So I changed the background to black, which helped to highlight the colours used in the strokes for the cubes and cuboids, and deleted all the trees and buildings.
Feedback given was that it felt a bit empty and should look like everything is coming from the middle.
The poster still looked quite empty in the middle, like there wasn't really much going on with the blocks. Amy also commented on the fact that she wanted to try to incorporate the 3D letterforms that she had created, so I recreated the letters as she had produced them on photoshop, and looked at how these could work in the middle...
I quite liked how the letters were working out in the middle, and tried the whole design with the Manchester poster, as I thought that the M would be hard to create using the isometric grid..
Unfortunately the M really wasn't working. I spent about an hour twiddling away with it trying to make it look right, but it really didn't work. Which was disappointing. So we all came together as a group to see what everyone has had been up to in order to come up with more ideas.
We all quite liked what Joe had done with his ideas and how he incorporated the logo and images in a larger size on the poster:
This looked SO much better!! It also helped to add body copy etc to the poster to see how the imagery worked alongside typography. At first the logo in the middle was filled in white, but this stood out too much so I created a gradient using the colour palette, and this was much more complimentary!
The images that I used for each poster were as following:
Leeds
Leeds Civic Hall
Broadcasting Place
Parkinsons Steps
Leeds Trinity
Manchester
University of Manchester
Museum of Science and Industry
Chinatown
The Trafford Centre
Hull
The Deep Aquarium
The Humber Bridge
Hull Maritime Museum
Freedom Festival
Liverpool
The Liver Building
Museum of Liverpool
Metropolitan Cathedral
Echo Wheel of Liverpool
The 4 Posters:
Joe then suggested placing the images in different areas of the logo for each poster, so I played with this idea..
I liked the way that the images looked like they were moving around the logo - could look really cool as an animation or a .gif!!!
Obviously the body copy will still need work, and Joe has created a custom typeface for the brief so this will need to be applied to the poster, but this will be fine for the meeting tomorrow!!
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